cc: wg1-ar4-ch06@joss.ucar.edu date: Fri, 24 Jun 2005 19:32:56 +0200 from: Stefan Rahmstorf subject: [Wg1-ar4-ch06] SEction 6.2.3 to: Eystein Jansen Hi friends, attached is section 6.2.3. for the FOD, including the EndNote file (which holds all my Chapter 6 references). The changes from the ZOD are not dramatic. What I have done: - No length cuts, as this was already right. - Cut the number of refs as requested (including all self-refs) and in fact a bit more - as this is a fairly general section on paleo-modeling methods, I thought I can cut a bit more refs than average, as general statements (like that models are used to simulate e.g. the LGM) do not need to be backed up with refs, since we discuss specific examples later on anyway. - Implemented reviewer requests for some small rephrasing, including new sentence on vege and ecosystem models - Implemented one reviewer request for changing a ref, resisted some reviewer requests for additional refs (e.g., citing Milankovich...) The exec bullet point for this section (methodological advances) is fine with me. Hope it is to everyones liking, Stefan p.s. Now I'm working on section 6.3.2 on abrupt climate changes. Won't finish today, but over weekend. -- To reach me directly please use: rahmstorf@ozean-klima.de (My former addresses @pik-potsdam.de are read by my assistant Brigitta.) Stefan Rahmstorf www.ozean-klima.de www.realclimate.org Attachment Converted: "c:\eudora\attach\6.2.3_FOD.doc" Attachment Converted: "c:\eudora\attach\Chapter6_Rahmstorf-Converted.enl" _______________________________________________ Wg1-ar4-ch06 mailing list Wg1-ar4-ch06@joss.ucar.edu http://www.joss.ucar.edu/mailman/listinfo/wg1-ar4-ch06