cc: Eystein Jansen ,rahmstorf@ozean-klima.de date: Thu Aug 31 15:52:58 2006 from: Keith Briffa subject: Fwd: Re: [Wg1-ar4-ch06] NEW DRAFT FOR LA REVIEW to: john.f.mitchell@metoffice.gov.uk John here are the suggested changes by Stefan that we discussed (thanks for these Sefan). I accept the minor wording changes shown (Eystein please implement) but disagree with suggested wording of the Von Storch paragraph - preferring my own earlier version) - so your opinion(s) welcome. Keith Date: Thu, 10 Aug 2006 20:21:57 +0200 From: Stefan Rahmstorf User-Agent: Thunderbird 1.5.0.5 (Windows/20060719) To: Eystein Jansen , Jonathan Overpeck , Keith Briffa Subject: Re: [Wg1-ar4-ch06] NEW DRAFT FOR LA REVIEW Hi folks - I read EVERY WORD of our chapter and here are my revisions.... see attached. Mostly minor (but all with thought, so don't just dismiss), except for one bigger paragraph concerning pseudo-proxies, for special consideration by Keith. And I make it shorter! The figures tomorrow. Chapter is looking pretty good! Cheers, Stefan -- To reach me directly please use: rahmstorf@ozean-klima.de (My former addresses @pik-potsdam.de are read by my assistant Brigitta.) Stefan Rahmstorf [1]www.ozean-klima.de [2]www.realclimate.org -- Professor Keith Briffa, Climatic Research Unit University of East Anglia Norwich, NR4 7TJ, U.K. Phone: +44-1603-593909 Fax: +44-1603-507784 [3]http://www.cru.uea.ac.uk/cru/people/briffa/