date: Fri, 09 Mar 2007 00:07:46 -0500 from: Francis Zwiers subject: Re: [Wg1-ar4-clas] draft to sign to: wg1-ar4-clas@joss.ucar.edu Hi all - here are a few more edits. I agree with Gabi that we shouldn't include the "puppet" sentence. Also, I don't think we need to compare what Susan said in Paris (as quoted by Wasdell) with something that Sir John might hypothetically have said. I think that sends a message about Susan that we don't mean to send! I've tried to add a sentence indicating that the Paris process improved the way the document communicates our findings, but that it did not change the finding themselves. Cheers, Francis [1]hegerl@duke.edu wrote: Hi all, an attempt to some more edits removing the "puppet" sentence and another sentence that I worried about - now on to the chapter edits checking (although this is more fun - maybe - anything is more fun than page proofs apart maybe from doing the taxes). I admit I am frustrated by what at least one of our collegues said to the new scientist. He should know better! Gabi Quoting Ken Denman [2]: Hi Piers et al, I have taken the liberty to suggest a few changes (with change tracker turned on) - while you Europeans (oops, and Brits) at least are sleeping. And Piers and Richard, thanks a lot for getting this moving quickly. Regards, Ken ps. Piers - my salary is paid by Fisheries and Oceans Canada. They are VERY uneasy when I speak or write letters to the press, but they get really upset when I don't credit them appropriately. C'est la vie. [3]piers@env.leeds.ac.uk wrote: Hi all This is the latest draft with Jerry's and Ken's edits. However, in addition I've deleted the para on the Paris meeting - as it was essentially repeated within the last paragraph, and slightly reordered the other paragraphs Again please make further edits. Also please could people approve the attachment of their name to such a letter. Non highlighted names are people who appear to have already given approval for their name to be used. If you are a yellow highlighted name I think you are likely (or very likely) to sign! If we could have a relaxed attitude and sign a letter that is still in the process of being drafted it would save someone (me) a bunch of work at the end collecting approvals Cheers ------------------------------------------------------------------------ _______________________________________________ Wg1-ar4-clas mailing list [4]Wg1-ar4-clas@joss.ucar.edu [5]http://lists.joss.ucar.edu/mailman/listinfo/wg1-ar4-clas -- Ken Denman, FRSC Canadian Centre for Climate Modelling and Analysis University of Victoria PO Box 1700 STN CSC Victoria, BC, V8W 2Y2 Phone: (250) 363 8230 FAX: (250) 363 8247 email: [6]ken.denman@ec.gc.ca Room 263 Courier: CCCMA/Ian Stewart Complex/UVic Rm 267 - 3964 Gordon Head Road Victoria, B.C. V8N 3X3 Also: Institute of Ocean Sciences Department of Fisheries and Oceans tel. 250 363 6335 web page: [7]http://www.cccma.bc.ec.gc.ca/~kdenman __________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________ Wg1-ar4-clas mailing list [8]Wg1-ar4-clas@joss.ucar.edu [9]http://lists.joss.ucar.edu/mailman/listinfo/wg1-ar4-clas -- Francis Zwiers Director, Climate Research Division, Environment Canada Toronto: 4905 Dufferin St., Toronto, Ont. M3H 5T4 Phone: (416)739-4767, Fax: (416)739-5700 Victoria: PO Box 1700, STN CSC, Victoria, BC, V8W 2Y2 Phone: (250)363-8229, Fax: (250) 363-8247 Attachment Converted: "c:\eudora\attach\NewScientist_2_Ken_gabi_francis.doc" _______________________________________________ Wg1-ar4-clas mailing list Wg1-ar4-clas@joss.ucar.edu http://lists.joss.ucar.edu/mailman/listinfo/wg1-ar4-clas