cc: Sandy.Harrison@bristol.ac.uk date: Mon, 20 Jun 2005 14:48:55 +0200 from: Fortunat Joos subject: Re: [Wg1-ar4-ch06] IPCC FOD : Holocene section to: Valerie.Masson@cea.fr Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1; format=flowed X-MIME-Autoconverted: from 8bit to quoted-printable by thunder.joss.ucar.edu id j5KCnmui025954 Dear Valerie, Attached suggestions and revision for the Holocene section. I have slightly expanded on Ruddiman taking into account the most recent literature. I have also updated the GHG figure, now showing also radiative forcing relative to 1765 conditions on a linear scale. The references for the GHG data are all given on top of the data files that I sent to you for the ZOD. Please let me know if I need to resend. The NOAA data (butler, conway, dlugokencky) are personal communications. With best wishes, Fortunat Valérie Masson-Delmotte wrote: > Dear all, > > Please find attached a new sketch for the FOD section on the Holocene - > it has to be finalised before June 15th, and figures must be finished > before June 1st (you can see the tracked changes from the ZOD version). > > I have modified the structure to include the modelling part (incl. text > from Chapter 9), the suggestions by the reviewers, and something about > interannual variability from the previous last section of the ZOD. I > need to reprocess all the text + references, modify the labelling of the > sections (new structure of the chapter). The references are not totally > inside the attached Endnote database but most of them are already. > > I have several requests for many of you : > > - Fortunat : you kindly offered to provide me with a xmgr figure showing > the Holocene GHG evolution, so ... this will be fine. > - Dick : can you update the description of ice sheet evolution during > the early Holocene (e.g. precise volume of ice caps at 10k, 8k, 6k, > dates of disappearance of Laurentide and Fennoscandia) > - Bettie : can you go through the modelling part (especially what I > called : what do we learn from equlibrium simulations) and improve it + > provide the table > - Eystein, Stefan : where does the 8.2 event go? In the previous section > on glacial interglacial time scale + rapid events or in the Holocene > section on rapid events? > - Dominik : can you please have a look at this terrible draft and > contact me to discuss the tropical precip figure + text ? > - Daniel, Ricardo, Ramesh, Peck : can you please send me what you think > are the most relevant data to illustrate the abrupt changes in tropical > precip (data + location of records latitude, longitude + references, if > possible in Endnote format on a separated file if you already have it) > - Peck : can you ask Julie to have a look at the last section (ENSO) and > update the refs to coral works? > - Sandy : can you have a look at the biome sections (introduction + warm > early Holocene +¨equilibrum runs sections) and improve them? > > The total (text + figures) should be about the right length after > rewriting, I think. > > If you rewrite some of the text can you please send it in a separate > word file (not correct this version?) > > Sincerely, > > Valerie. > > _______________________________________________ > Wg1-ar4-ch06 mailing list > Wg1-ar4-ch06@joss.ucar.edu > http://www.joss.ucar.edu/mailman/listinfo/wg1-ar4-ch06 -- --- Climate and Environmental Physics, Physics Institute, University of Bern Sidlerstr. 5, CH-3012 Bern Phone: ++41(0)31 631 44 61 Fax: ++41(0)31 631 87 42 e-mail: joos@climate.unibe.ch; Internet: http://www.climate.unibe.ch/~joos/ Attachment Converted: "c:\eudora\attach\masson_FOD-VMD-2_revfjoos_19jun05.doc" _______________________________________________ Wg1-ar4-ch06 mailing list Wg1-ar4-ch06@joss.ucar.edu http://www.joss.ucar.edu/mailman/listinfo/wg1-ar4-ch06